Our “Can You Write Better Than This Junk” Contest can’t go on forever, if for no other reason than the world needs to stop obsessing over this competition and pay attention to other (albeit more mundane) news.
We’ll find a way to feature all the other entries by the end of next week — I hope. In the meantime, two more entries.
Ryan Patrick:
Steve Stone:
By now you know what to do: Pile on with your forthright critiques….
Two more entries for our thrilling “Can You Write Better Than This Junk” Contest.
Wayne Turso notes: “I wrote it and did the male voice. My wife did the female voice.”
Our second entry of the day was written by Peter Gladwin and produced by Gary Gerber:
I’m sure Wayne, Peter and Gary are eagerly awaiting your feedback on their work….
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(Web Guy #2 and my office manager really don’t like those last-minute brainstorms. But they knew the job was dangerous when they took it.)
Seriously, this is one heckuva bargain for radio advertising pros. See for yourself. (This offer disappears after Friday of this week.)
Wow, lots of entries coming in for my exciting “Can You Write Better Than This Junk” Contest. So many that I’ll share two per day with you.
The first is from Steve Anderson:
Our second entry today is from Brian Haymond, who says, “I wrote and produced the spot. My daughter Samantha (8) is the lead character with Olivia (11) and my wife adding their voices.” (Oddly, Brian doesn’t mention how old his wife is.) Brian Haymond:
Your comments, judges? (That means you. Yeah, you. The person reading these words right now.)
