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Three more hopeful entries in our “Can You Write Better Than This Junk”<\/a> contest…<\/p>\n

Jonathan Lumley<\/span> says:<\/p>\n<\/p>\n

“I thought I’d try selling the sale with some pictures. I know full well that a client like this wouldn’t ‘buy’ into that concept no matter how well I sold it to them, it would have to start with ‘them’ and the discount, we have the same clients in South Africa. But I thought I’d try combining nature with the sale, as an angle. And my apologies to all producers, for the crudity of my editing and processing, oh and the lack of effects and music. No time (as per usual) It\u2019s about the script isn\u2019t??”<\/p><\/blockquote>\n

Jonathan Lumley:<\/span><\/span><\/div>\n

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Susan Wright wisely kisses up to the judge by saying:<\/p>\n

“Thanks for the challenge!”<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<\/p>\n<\/p>\n

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Susan Wright:<\/span><\/p>\n

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Adam Garey<\/span> explains:<\/p>\n<\/p>\n

“I wanted something not real normal. Something that doesn’t sound over contrived. I may get slammed \u2014 I see I missed some avenues. Part of the learning process…Thanks for the comments and thanks to Dan.”<\/p><\/blockquote>\n

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Adam Garey<\/span>:<\/p>\n

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Readers? You have some input for these three hopeful contestants?<\/p>\n

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