{"id":20399,"date":"2018-07-01T18:42:58","date_gmt":"2018-07-02T01:42:58","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/danoday.com\/blog\/?p=20399"},"modified":"2018-07-03T18:10:15","modified_gmt":"2018-07-04T01:10:15","slug":"mercedes-incompetent-radio-advertising","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/danoday.com\/blog\/2018\/07\/mercedes-incompetent-radio-advertising\/","title":{"rendered":"Mercedes’ Record of Incompetent Radio Advertising Continues"},"content":{"rendered":"

This really should not be a difficult concept to grasp:<\/span><\/p>\n

\"radio<\/a>In a radio commercial, what the listener pictures is what the listener remembers.<\/span><\/strong><\/span><\/h2>\n

This Mercedes spot goes out of its way to paint pictures that do nothing to deliver or support the sales message while spouting that message in a manner that guarantees few will hear it and none will remember.<\/span><\/p>\n

Here’s the Mercedes radio commercial.<\/span><\/strong><\/span><\/h2>\nhttp:\/\/danoday.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/07\/Mercedes-radio-spot-6-18.mp3<\/a><\/audio>\n


\nNotice how the spot grabbed your attention from the beginning?<\/span><\/p>\n

“You grew up together. Went to college together,” delivered conversationally.<\/span><\/p>\n

“Ah,” you thought. “This is going to tell some sort of human story. Let’s see where it goes.”<\/span><\/p>\n

You pictured the best friend standing up at the wedding reception and raising his glass to make a toast.<\/span><\/p>\n

The only additional mental image<\/a> you experienced might’ve been of someone in the wedding party inexplicably whistling in the background.<\/span><\/p>\n

If you heard that commercial on the radio, 5 minutes later I could’ve asked you, “You know that commercial you just heard, where the guy makes a speech at his best friend’s wedding? What were they advertising? What action did the advertiser want you to take?”<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n

“Uh,”<\/em> you’d reply, “something about…um…some car or something??”<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n

Radio Storytelling Tips<\/span><\/strong><\/h2>\n

Just for a moment, let’s pretend that story does lead to a strong sales message.<\/span><\/p>\n

1.<\/strong><\/span> Don’t have the announcer also play the part of the best friend.<\/span><\/p>\n

We already see him as that guy who’s talking to us through that electronic device.<\/span><\/p>\n

But suddenly he’s “you” \u2014 the best friend making the toast?<\/span><\/p>\n

The listener doesn’t see the best friend.<\/span><\/p>\n

The listener sees the announcer playing the role of the best friend.<\/span><\/p>\n

Abruptly it becomes clear this isn’t some human story. It’s …some sort of dumb commercial.<\/span><\/p>\n

2.<\/strong> <\/span>If you were reading a novel and came across a sentence that said, “She was crying. Tears were streaming down her face,” you might well think, “Well, yeah. That’s kinda what happens what a person cries. Once you said she was crying, I assumed tears were involved.”<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n

That would be bad writing.<\/span><\/p>\n

In a radio story (in a commercial or as entertainment), if a character clears his throat and begins to speak, prefacing those actions with the announcer’s declaring, “He clears his throat and says” is bad storytelling.<\/span><\/p>\n

Helpful Suggestion for Mercedes<\/span><\/strong><\/h2>\n

Fire the ad agency that you paid to create that drivel.<\/span><\/p>\n

Create your own drivel. There must be an intern around with a few minutes to spare.<\/span><\/p>\n

Take the money you otherwise would’ve paid the agency and donate to a worthy charity.<\/span><\/p>\n

Download free radio copywriting seminar here<\/span><\/a>.<\/span><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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