{"id":15602,"date":"2013-08-22T00:09:59","date_gmt":"2013-08-22T07:09:59","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/danoday.com\/blog\/?p=15602"},"modified":"2013-08-22T00:12:02","modified_gmt":"2013-08-22T07:12:02","slug":"radio-copywriting-lesson","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/danoday.com\/blog\/2013\/08\/radio-copywriting-lesson\/","title":{"rendered":"RADIO COPYWRITING LESSON: Hit Hard"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><span style=\"font-size: 18px;\">Here&#8217;s an important ad copywriting lesson of which I first became consciously aware years ago during a conversation with <a href=\"http:\/\/danoday.com\/strangers\/\"><strong>Dick Orkin<\/strong><\/a>.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 18px;\">He was telling me about a radio advertising campaign the Famous Radio Ranch had done in South Florida.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 18px;\">The big U.S.P. was the superiority of the client\u2019s service over that of the established market leader: the dominant regional newspaper. <\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 18px;\">They made that the focus of the entire campaign: how lame the newspaper\u2019s service was compared to their client\u2019s (which was just being introduced to that market).<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 18px;\">One of the local radio stations balked at airing the spot, because they didn\u2019t <em>\u201cwant to upset the newspaper.\u201d<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 18px;\"><em>\u201cHow much money does the newspaper spend advertising on your station?\u201d<\/em> asked Dick.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 18px;\">\u201c<em>Uh\u2026Nothing. They\u2019ve never advertised with us.\u201d<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p><em><span style=\"font-size: 18px;\">\u201cSo what\u2019s the problem?\u201d<\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 18px;\">The campaign aired as written, and it was hugely successful: Soon the client had a larger market share of that particular service than the newspaper.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 18px;\">As Dick told me the story, I had an <em>aha!<\/em> experience. When writing copy, I\u2019ve always looked for strong themes and strong lines.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 18px;\">But until that moment I never consciously sought to <strong>pounce<\/strong> on them; I viewed them as vehicles to help deliver the sales message.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 18px;\">Ever since then, however, when I find myself writing an \u201cedgy\u201d line that powerfully drives home that message, I\u2019m quite willing to throw away the original script and start all over, with that provocative line as the radio commercial\u2019s focal point.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 18px;\">To use a boxing metaphor: If you discover your fighter has a powerful left jab, don\u2019t just hope that he occasionally throws it; build your fight plan around that left jab.<\/span><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Here&#8217;s an important ad copywriting lesson of which I first became consciously aware years ago during a conversation with Dick Orkin. 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